empty playground
cold wind rides the
swing alone
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- Poet Lanie
- I'm a published poet and book reviewer. I'm also a nominee for the Pushcart Prize 2009. My life revolves around in writing.
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Beautiful and moving as always Lanie. You continue to excel,
Love you,
Joy
Wonderful imagery, Lanie. The haiku is traditionally supposed to talk of the seasons, and this one marvellously conjures up the scene plus the feelings of winter. The only thing is, a haiku proper follows a very strict pattern, 17 syllables spread across three lines, 5 + 7 + 5, a bit like this:
If I weren't so poor
Ugly and untalented
I'd be quite a catch!
except it's not supposed to be silly like my one. Hope you don't mind me mentioning it.
Much love,
Will
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